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Great incite, gripping, great work, congrats

So beautiful... yet so sad. You always write beautifully. True talent.. no need to say more you know how blessed you are. :D

Oh my, Stevie, I have goosebumps. You've touched my soul with this story. Wonderfully written, and I can feel the pain.
Warmest regards and respect,
CJ Heck

I have Sereni to thank for drawing my attention to this heartfelt story.
I wish you well with your writing.

Al the best,
Chris

The words of this story touched me deeply I like the way that it was told and it read like a very long poem, nevertheless I really enjoyed it.

This was well written. It's so sad and I liked the perspective.

Thank you all for your comments. Honestly, I wasn't too sure about this piece but I'm reassured by your words. This is something incredibly personal for me (and a main reason why I've been MIA for a while) so it means a lot that I can share it with you all.

So beautifully written and so painfully sad.

A beautifully written piece exemplifying a mother's primitive love for her unborn child and for the one she lost. You write with passion and clarity and we readers feel every emotion. Well done.

Your beautiful words are drenched with a mothers love for her children. Such torture wanting them to stay yet unable to hold them. Serena