BookRix

its okay i wish it was longer

This is the sequel to Calypso, so you might like that one as well. :) There's 5 chapters of that one uploaded.

We need more to these stories please

by y'all's comments. Thank you so much! I... I don't know what else to say but thank you!

I'm hanging...write some more

I just got to it. It was a very good piece. I did not want to comment until I finished it. You conveyed a lot of emotions and I have to agree with everyone else the descriptions were lovely. I had the imagery in my head. Truly enjoyable.

this book was like television in my head, it was so detailed! good work and good luck!

I love your writing style. Gave you a vote. Keep up the great work. Don't forget to drop by The Healirims if you haven't done so yet. Best wishes. =-)

This was GREAT! I wish there was more!

This is a great prologue to a larger story! Your writing is imaginative and your use of imagery is outstanding...it's like a 3D story presented in a written format...