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Love it! So good! Couldn't stop reading! Can't wait to see where you go with this :)
I do, however, have some critiques:

You have some punctuation mistakes and tiny errors of the sorts. Make sure your sentences make sense! When the dragon queen died, I didn't know what was going on. I was clueless. I still am... just a little. You need to make sure your sentences make sense and aren't too complicated.

And Steephi seems angry all the time. Maybe give your readers a glimpse of her soft side, or normal side. Unless she's always angry... To have a reader be able to sympathize with the main character, you need to make her a tad more realistic. Her moods change too suddenly and the conversations are a bit random.

Now the very beginning of the story hooked me like a proper book should! I was speeding through the text to find out why Steephi was being forced to wear a nice dress and trying to figure out why she was so upset! Bravo!

Oh, and I say this all the time, but make the paragraphs defined! I can't tell if you've made a new paragraph or what. The more paragraphs the better, as long as you space them out correctly ;)

Overall, very interesting! Can't wait to finish it when I have some more time!
I REALLY enjoyed reading this! Though it is the type of story that a lot of people use, it's very good! I like how you gave each person personalities, thought sometimes I can't tell who is talking.
LOVED it!
Keep writing! :)

---RbG

it was awesome

I INJOY THIS BOOK VERY MUCH THANK YOU

I plan to upload the entire book onto here, but it's difficult and time-consuming. I have to re-format the entire thing every time, because of the italics used for the dragon speech. I'm glad you liked it though!

Are you going to update this? I absolutely loved it <3

I really like the book.

Let me know when you update it.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Can't wait for more

Wow and I mean wow, thats wonderful, your truly gifted with art of the written world. Love the dragons. Your description amazing. awesome read.

I was caught immediately. 6 years-old or otherwise, your imagination and world building are stunning.
I'm left hanging, waiting for more of this unique land filled with flying dragons and queen riders:)