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Amazing dosent even cover this book its epic awsome, i dont know how to explain. I love the idea the plot and the concept of the story. I hope i can keep seeing more storys like this on bookrix.
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Amazing Stevie. Other than the excellence of the plot thus far and your incredible gift for imagery...did you notice that in the narrative you employed all the senses? That hit me. That makes good writing GREAT! Again, I'm so impressed with how you are able to weave a story, as though the author didn't exist and I've stepped into a new, fresh world inhabited by REAL beings!
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Something I've been taught is to do exactly that and employ all the senses. This quote really got that through to me.
"Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass." ~Anton Chekhov
It's something I try to do in all my writing. The senses are what... mehr anzeigen
I can't believe no one has commented on this book yet, it's still a little raw, but i love it.
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Yeah, it's really rough. I almost didn't put it up, since it lacks the polish of a good piece, but I promised to get a chapter up once a month. I'm glad you liked it. It's fun getting to read something written so long ago.
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