BookRix

I was reading, thinking of how we take the precious moments for granted when it struck me who was telling the story . . . I'd write more but there are too many tears clouding my vision, and I don't have words to tell you how your story touched me.

Heart wrenching, heart warming and heart felt. With the written word you create crisp, clean images. You capture the longing and sorrow of a loved one saying goodbye. Good job. Robynn

Nothing I've ever read has made me shed a tear, until now. For that, stevie, you have my vote.

Such a sweet and tender short. :) All of the little details made made this story that much more heart wrenching. I loved it definitely adding to favourites :)

so beautifully told...p

Ah Stevie,
How perfectly you write in 1st pov. The little things add such dimension, but it is the pathos, I think..how each of your narrators elicit such deep emotional response from the reader. Exceptional (again).

This was beautiful and moving I thought. Only gradually does it dawn on you who is looking down at the child. I'll read more of your writing.

Loved this one! Sweet, but also sad! Keep on writing

:'( so sad.

so sweet but sad...