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I love it.

You truly have to write more.

I have got to know what happened.

I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment! Good writing and about as much fun as one can have with their clothes on! Politically incorrect, horny, hungry and thirsty. I know this Davy you speak of. Fresh. Go ON Ryan!

I know your feeling exactly, lol. I feel the same way having written all of those pages and still not having come to a resolution (sigh) but I've a feeling the Timestream is going to carry Davey and I down its raging rapids for quite a while yet, before depositing us at a disembarkation point of resounding resolution ;) This is, however, my favorite ongoing project to date and I will definitely be updating it further as I write :) Thanks for enjoying it and I hope you continue to enjoy! RMH

Review - What I really hate is to spend all that time reading 157 pages and not have a resolution at the end! Darn It!

But that also tells you that if I read it to the end it kept my interest, definitely. I love the paradoxes of time travel thinking. You did an awesome job of keeping the juxtaposing straight. I even enjoyed the little lessons on time education.

You have a wit that is interesting. When you go to edit, take out a little of the introspection to keep it moving quickly. Outside of that, I really enjoyed this story and your writing voice. Awesome job. Robynn

For all who may wonder- as of right now I just can't stop writing this book I love it so much, so updates and revisions are definitely slated for the, dunt dunt duhh, Future. Lol, hope y'all have found a TRU of your own so you can keep up ;)

@Revkenr, you're not kidding about the confusion, lol. I've been meaning to draw up a timeline just so I can keep track of it all but that darned procrastination monster has got me again ;) @Paige, thanks for enjoying so far. When I started writing this it was all about keeping the voice (that and I just love time travel so I had to write a time story of my own) so I'm glad you like it so far and I hope it continues to please you and everyone else kind enough to take a gander :) @Revkenr, oh and I hope you won't be too disappointed if Davey ain't the Gunman, lol

Very well written. It is a bit confusing, but then again, I guess time travel can do that to a person.

I am still wondering if Dave himself might be the gunman, and he still doesn't know it.

If he is tracking himself, it would make an awesome paradox.

Keep up the good work.

Thank you for catching my date mistake, 2001 was definitely wrong and I have since corrected it. As for the Gunman, well let's just say Davey does bump into himself but whether he's the Gunman or not, well, time will have to tell! :) Thanks and Enjoy, RMH

Wouldn't we all want to go back in time! I am sure there are a lot of things I would change if I could.

This is a very interesting book. I was wondering though if there is any potential problems with the doctors. You know the Pare of them, (Paradox) haha.

Two things caught my attention though on page 37 when you went back in time from 08.09.2011 to 08.08.2001 seems like 10 years rather than 2 weeks. In a time travel book this can be very important.

The other thing is the Gun thing. I hope it is not as obvious as I think. Is the Mysterious stranger with the gun Dave from another time? If so when will Dave figure that on out. I did already. And if not, way to go. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next.

You have great writing skills:) Thanx for sharing this wonderful piece. I cannot wait until you add more it is very interesting, and i have not read anything like it before.