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I read through some of these poems a few times. I feel like you've filled this book with quite a bit of truth about yourself, life, those close around you. These are certain aspects that most leave out of winter, only captivated with what warms you more so, than what chills your bone. I like the opposing stance you've taken and enjoyed this.

Meaningful, rhyming poetry. I particularly like the poem, "Stay", a plea to the child in us to stay young and enjoy that time.
"Someone stop that child,
before that child is me." is a great line we can all relate to.

Stay was incredible- you can tell you put yourself into it. Great work.

I really couldn't find anything to say about this book in terms of what could be improved. I like your poetry especially the one about Work. It speaks of where my life is at with my employment at the moment and you said it clear and loud...getting old sucks especially when all you have to show for your effort is more effort that takes you nowhere in the end...so yeah...it would be nice just to rest that tired soul and not feel guilty about it. That would be heaven now wouldn't it?

Hello bl4izz3r,

I have intercepted your transmission, and run a diagnostic scan, the output of which I will send via a private signal. robottina's favorites were "Work" and "Stay".
Good luck,
robottina

Thank you for participating in our
poetry writing contest "Winter & Poems".

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