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OMG update!!!!!

Please add more!

As a high school student myself, I'll tell you what I think,

Alegbra II itself, in my experience, is actually a sophomore class, as is the advanced class. Even at that, my school does classes slightly differently than others, and I tend to find that we're a little bit behind. Maybe Trigonometry or even Calculus would be better options for "smarty pants" classes?

I have a little bit of advice for you: There's no need to point out the obvious. The idiotic can be idiotic, the smart can be wicked intelligent, and the reader can probably figure that out already. It's one of the things I disliked about Veronica Roth's final Divergent book, the over-explanation of things that are best left to the reader's imagination.

Your grammar is a little off, but that can easily be fixed by an editor.

Overall, the story is a teeny (see what I did there? Teen? Teeny? No? Okay) bit cliché, but you're doing well.

~Hannah

I am not completely read but its good nice trying if you would be so you are nice writer :)

I would love to know what happens