Teeny Tiny Tales

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Teeny Tiny Tales
Written for the Drabble Contest these three stories get the reader interested in only 100 words.

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short story, drabble contest, action, love
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mjreed09

It seems like all your short stories have so much potential to be expanded. They're really gripping for their length and they have great tension throughout.
I really liked the "kisses dominating my lips" part in the first one, it's a very clean way to describe what would otherwise be a difficult concept.
I think that just in terms of formatting a little bit bigger would be nice, the text was really small.

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Rgabel

Love at First Site - tells all
Kidnapping - good descriptions, nice ending
Blind Date - would have liked to read more!

Good job!

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