Well written three stories..all so different.
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It seems like all your short stories have so much potential to be expanded. They're really gripping for their length and they have great tension throughout.
I really liked the "kisses dominating my lips" part in the first one, it's a very clean way to describe what would otherwise be a difficult concept.
I think that just in terms of formatting a little bit bigger would be nice, the text was really small.
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Love at First Site - tells all
Kidnapping - good descriptions, nice ending
Blind Date - would have liked to read more!
Good job!
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