Samudra

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User: Roshika
Samudra

Everywhere was silent and calm. Birds chripping on branches.Jina was walking forward. Though huge trees covered the sky with their branches, it failed to completely blocked the sun rays. When sun beams comes through branches it glittered. With slight misty air sun rays seems as white yelowish beams. It was so beautiful!. Jina took a deep breath. She kept walking ahead, slowly. Fallen dried leaves was a carpet to her feet. With the slow wind Jinas hair coggled across her face. She closed her eyes to feel the wind. But in next few seconds she heard a sound. It was not much far away. It was a sudden shake of a nearby bush. Jina opened her eyes. With a grinned mouth, there was a wolf staring at her. Her eyes gone wide with fear. Though she tried to scream, but the sound not came out. Jina heard deep growl of the wolf. It was sure in next few seconds the wolf will jump on her. She tried to turn back and run. But the effort was useless. She was unable to move. Fear made her stunned. In next second the wolf started to run forward. In that same second, some other thing too started to happen. With a speed of an eye blink, someone moved through a bush and blocked the way of the wolf. Even in that speed movement, Jina identified that figure. Then there came a sound of another growl. It was not the wolf!

 

(updated.  Please read and leave a comment. :) )


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fantasy, romance, love, adventure, fiction
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Seraph Wedd

Technically speaking, if you can have someone edit the grammar and spelling misses, I believe that the story will be much more vivid. Personally speaking, I like the honest and straight flow of the story. It is very good. ^_^

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Roshika

Thank you so much dear. Yes I know there may be lot of mistakes in language. Because English is not my main language :). thank you I will try to correct those mistakes.

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