Technically speaking, if you can have someone edit the grammar and spelling misses, I believe that the story will be much more vivid. Personally speaking, I like the honest and straight flow of the story. It is very good. ^_^
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I'm reading. This is quite interesting! :)
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Interesting Story .... Deep and Different ....
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Thank you so much dear. Yes I know there may be lot of mistakes in language. Because English is not my main language :). thank you I will try to correct those mistakes.