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I like your rule-free poems. Filled with exuberance and the intoxication of the language. I didn't understand everything but I still wanted to read it all. Well done

You write better compared to your age. My favorite was "Meditation Or Hibernation".

Just would like to suggest a small change, if possible remove the underlining..It strains the eyes..

Everything else is good....Voted...and keep this talent alive in you.....

The rambling rhythm of your words is intoxicating. This is the kind of poetry I like the most. I would take out the underlines, though; they are distracting.

I voted though I havent finnished reading but will sure go back and finnish it.Lovely style and such insight.

I have read and voted for your book. You have a future in writing./joeparente author of "THE RECIPE"

Anger and anguish reverberate in your poems be it intentional or not. Once I got your rhythm I enjoyed your writing....Paula

sure...infact i started writing story...!
thanQ for yr encouragement and support!

Thank you for putting your work up for us to read. My daughter enjoys writing poetry and you remind me very much of her. There is a little anger, a little rebellion inside the words, and yet what teenager doesn't have thoughts like these. As with my daughter there is a little bit of a generation gap between us and I didn't always grasp what you were trying to say. But, I think by underlining, it made things much more difficult. You had one poem, "Letter of Suspense" that wasn't underlined and I enjoyed this one, didn't feel like I was fighting to grasp the meaning. Keep writing. I wish I could have started at such a young age. The world is yours.

If you feel up to reading some of "grandma's work" I have a story up in the family contest called Nana's Love. I'd love to hear from a younger reader.

Hi there,

I'm going to begin reading your poetry. At first glance two things happened to me. 1. I noticed that your 1st poem was intitled Cats, and I love cats. 2. I found the underlining distracting and took away some of my pleasure in reading.

Halfway though, I think your lexicon is large and varied. I notice you have a way of stringing together sentences filled with beautiful words that evoke a range of feelings within me, however, I really struggled to make sense of meaning in any of your poems, as though there were no logic or structure behind those beautiful words.

It may be that my understanding of poetry is limited but I almost feel as though you were thinking of really clever and wonderful sounding sentences and popping them into your poems almost willy nilly, though, I'm sure when you wrote this work you had a definite guidance drawing your words along.

Good luck in the comp.