BookRix

A richly sweet poem. Beautiful, the language flows.

Robin, you are a really fine writer. I have read everything you have posted and shall read it again.
mcd

I would prefer the last section kept in third person. We know the poet is the one with the skates.
You are a powerful writer. One of the best I have read recently teachermattie@wrutertutor.net.

Thanks guys! I love you all!

R

good poem, congrats...

your writing is wonderful, as always!
Linda

Looks like I didn't get a chance to read this until it was too late to vote... =( sorry, I would've voted for it. Amazing poem! I love it as much as I love all of your work =D

Truly beautiful Robin. You never fail to amaze me with your insight and talent. God Bless You!

I like it, I like it a lot!

Lee:)

I just read your short-story: "Barnum Lake". Absolutely stunning work! I'm very happy to have you as a new friend. Thank you so much for your time, and your vote!

Robin