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Wow, just wow. I wish I could write a song as good as this.
Well done, this is amazing.

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This is my song. I wrote it myself, along with a couple of others. This is my first love song I ever did, and Im happy to claim it!

Could you just clarify...Did you write this song? or is it someones else's song you've entered as a poem?

Such an amazing gift you have! Wow! I could just imagine hearing this song playing on the radio. You remind me of me. I began writing songs at age 11. You are so talented and I want to encourage you to keep on writing. This poem is sad, yet hopeful. It contains yearning and unrequited love. Lovely lyrics to this poem.

You are truly talented, granddaughter!! This is absolutely beautiful!

Wow...such mature writing for a 12 year old.