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My first impression of this mystery novel is that it could have been much improved by entering it one chapter at a time in the editor. It is impossible to skip back to a previous chapter and find your way back.
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I find it quite disconcerting to run across many instances when a sentence is broken only to be continued in the next paragraph. Otherwise sentence structuring seems to be done well and spelling is exemplary. I'm about a third the way through the novel (page 51). It's a... mehr anzeigen
I find it quite disconcerting to run across many instances when a sentence is broken only to be continued in the next paragraph. Otherwise sentence structuring seems to be done well and spelling is exemplary. I'm about a third the way through the novel (page 51). It's a fascinating mystery and quite well presented so I am enjoying it in spite the small distractions.
It is an interesting case and well worth the time it would take to redo the editing and straighten it out. I enjoyed it, all the same.
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