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What a fun read, Rob! Great story and very unexpected...great job!

Hugs,
Donna

What a fun read, Rob...great job, keep up the good work.

TTYS,
Russ

This is a good twist on the idea of parallel worlds. I didn't find any of it hard to understand at all. Good work.

Bravo, Rob. You have a vast imagination, it would be fun to do a progressive story with you:I would start, you would take over, I would jump back in, you would pick up the next thought, and so on... You should submit this story to every site that has this genre option, IT WOULD BE SNAPPED up by the first forward thinking group! Kudos, my friend, you have my vote. Elizabeth

This one seemed a lot easier to read and make sense of given its more static location.

Enjoyed this parallel world - the start of a longer story? kept and voted..Paula

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who knew a story titled "Final Exam" would turn out this way? Vivid writing, fast paced, fun sci-fi. Interesting and original ---- why can't Hollywood be utilizing stories like this as the basis for their blockbusters instead of rehashing the same tired story lines and variations creating so-called "guaranteed hits".... Cheers Mr Astor!!!! Well done!