WAY TO MUCH grammatical mistakes WAY TO MUCH slang it made no literal sense I couldn't even get through them going out of school. It made so little sense I just quit reading it.
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i kinda just filled in the words on where they needed to be
you need to use your imagination
good at speech. like it
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had to stop reading. Too many grammatical mistakes. Makes it totally unenjoyable
good story but to much cussing I like a book that has some cussing in it but u really shouldn't of used the n word but other that that it was an amazing book actually very fun to read and it was hard to stop reading lol
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Plz update......and i loved every bit of that grammar...lol it sounded so danm funny, but a good funny, plz update and finish this book
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I would realy like to know what happened further,great story
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It need some grammar check and spell check done.
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i really want to know what happens at the beachhhh