A lovely written work, showing how even in those we love, we can fear to trust
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Wow, I have to say that I am not totally into the "lovey-dovey" genre, but I really enjoyed this. Nice writing!:)
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You have so much potential with your writing!! I can not wait to read more and see what happens next! I love books about love stories and you have got a great one in the making!!
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to vote...love happy endings...p
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good luck :)
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This turned out to be a really lovely piece. Voted :)
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I have a question for you then, Pamel
I am not afraid of lightning but I decided this character would. Do you think I caught the feeling and emotion well? Do you think I need improvement?
And suggestions would be greatly appreciated :D
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cool
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It moved along and I was finished to soon. Good job. Serena
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Nice, Renaldowen. Nice writing!
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