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It is a good legend story. Way of description is nice.
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Thank you so much for the suggestions Mr. Carver.. I'll definitely keep them in mind when i finish with my second story!!
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Fine work with just a couple of touches needed for clarity (You may not use "U" in place of "you" in writing to be taken seriously)
But I loved that ending!
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