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I really liked your book, too :-) Well done!
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such a sweet tale, really enjoyed it.Made me think of my nan xxx
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I enjoyed the story. Left me wanting more.
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this book is really good i hope u guys who are reading this book will like it i think i should readit again the peoples that think this book is borning you are wrong people i wish i could buy this book but i do not know how much it cost and which store is it in so you guys thatthink that it is a bad book u should really read it so i hope you injoy it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks for you lovely comments.
terrible punctuation, desperately in need of editing
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Hi Rainzuk,
Welcome to bookrix. I love your profile pic, I'm a big cat lover.
I was surprised at your very brief response to my story 'Hollywood Classics' - terrible punctuation, desperately in need of editing.
I provide feedback all the time when reading others books and there are... mehr anzeigen
If I find time I will go back to your story & point out some examples. The biggest thing is use of the semi-colon. If I remember correctly, and I wasn't counting, I think it was only used correctly once or twice in the whole piece, which did not detract from the story. Some... mehr anzeigen
The story is very interesting and it is heart touching a woman who is lonely of her late how she feel until she reads the local gazette and the idea of a woman to engaging in this way to over come her lonelyness is a very good idea
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i absolutely loved it.you can actually feel the gentleness,loving,care involved in the people in the story.
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A beautiful, gentle story. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Carol x
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