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Great story! I actually loved that she was independent and self assured. Would have loved more interaction and story.. more about her. The real trick to making a book people love and keep reading is getting them to like your main character - or better yet - to care about her. You did that. The ending - rushed. I'm calling you on that. Also, you cruel heartless fiend... I was into it and i ran out of story. thats so not cool.
well done.
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is there more? or this is just it?
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