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Thank you for reading my story! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for sharing the story. I enjoyed reading the story. The story with the suspense and the sudden twist made it an interesting read.

Thanks for reading my story! I'm sure I could do more with it. I may once the contest is over though I may just keep it how it is and have it a short story. Thanks again for reading it! I'm glad you liked it!

You have a wonderful story here with a good hook and surprise plot twists. Enjoyed it. You still have so much more you could add to it! Like how you built suspense in it.
I voted because of the plot surprises.
Good Job. Robynn

thanks! glad you liked it!

WAS A GREAT STORY LOVED IT.

WAS A GREAT STORY LOVED IT.

WAS A GREAT STORY LOVED IT.

WAS A GREAT STORY LOVED IT.