I liked it very much,very good. Serena and I voted
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End is marvelous & voted for the end having emotions to touch heart.
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Wonderful surprise ending. This was a lot said in such few words! My style. Star and vote./joeparente
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Thank you all for the kind words for my first attempt at poetry. And also for the votes received.
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I feel sad for the couple in your book. Lovely writing.
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Loved this Poem. Memories are very selective and personal.
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Great! Brought many images to my mind...laughed at the bar scene...but the last two lines hit home...sounded so sad.
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Chuckles, you never cease to amaze me or put a smile on my face. You really have a gift that puts the reader right there beside you. Fingers crossed I'll be able to make it down NOLA-way for a few days in May!!!
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