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I really enjoyed that chapter.

I really enjoyed that chapter.

I really enjoyed that chapter.

You are such a delightful author with your vivid, colorful descriptions. I really loved this coming from a little girls (adoring of her mother) view-point. The shaven eye brows, fire-engine, red lipstick. The eyelashes...everything. I could smell the "aqua velvet", and sense the 'good old days' when whole families used to spend fun times together at "Granges and Lodges".
I love the use of your words like "Noodle head", "Danced right out from under his hat".
Title is great! You are one of my all time favorites. :)

Best to you,

Robin

I loved the concept of a string divorce; it was a well told story. If disputes were settle more with a string I believe the divorce courts would not be full…most importantly children reminding the parents of how silly they were acting out. I have cast a vote for your book and saved as a favorite. If you get a chance read reflections/Little girl’s short stories…I entered in the family contest as well, I need your opinion and your vote.

Linda B lbolden.books

A very good story and the concept of the string was told with great passion...how individual's who love each other deal with their disputes.

Linda B lbolden.books

This is a very fun story and deserves a vote. I am also going to save it to my favorites. I sure would like to meet that noodle brother of yours! Very good RD./joeparente

I enjoyed this and it even had me chuckling out loud in a few places. I had never heard of a string divorce before, but I guess it served its purpose. :-) Probably the only negative I have are a couple of dialogue tags were separated from the dialogue by a period rather than a comma. Easy enough to overlook. Sometimes tense would jump from present to past, but I have to say it didn't really take away from my enjoyment of the story. Good job. Gave you a vote.

If you have a minute I also have a story in this contest and I'm always looking for feedback, positive or negative. It all helps. Voting is optional, but I'd love it if you took a look. Nana's love.
Thanks for the great read. I'll have to check out the entire book.
Denna

This is a wonderful chapter! You write very well. You have my vote!

The chapter is entertaining. I really liked it. Telling it from the child's point of view pulled me in, since I taught children for years.

Your character development of Mama grabs the reader from the beginning of the chapter. I look forward to reading more of your work.

I'll give you my vote.