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Thank you for the story.
It is very motivational. I tried running for the bus today very early in the morning, not realizing I didn't have any feathers- until I read your story. It was appreciated. I will share it with my nieces and nephews. Much continued success
on your life path. Jah.Creations

Inspirational and funny at the same time - you got my vote!

Cute little story. It has a good story arc for younger children to follow.
I voted for you.
Augustus.

Terrific, Ray! Not only was it the one who truly believed, his faith drew followers, and then they acted as one:) A powerful message for not only younger readers, but for everyone.
GOOD plot and writing!