i agree with Maddymo123 the grammar and spelling are a little off... nothing that you can't fix. I like the plot though and i can't wait to see what happens between Trever and Kasey.
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dont stop keep writing it's really good though
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the storyline is good but u have to work on paragraphing, spelling,and grammer
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