Story-line is good, needs some editing. :)
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This is a short moral story, conserned with learning. In this story a boy, very poor, wants to study and wants to live comfortable life. He works hard and pays for his study. He faces difficulties, at last he reaches at big stage.
Story-line is good, needs some editing. :)
Thanks dear, but what kind of editing need?