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I forgot how much fun I had writing this. I love writing short stories and will be writing more over the summer now that I have a break from classes.

Very well written, a couple of spelling errors, but compared to what's out there, it is excelent. The story held my attention. You should write a longer one.
I'll keep watching.
Laz

good job! Would have liked more!

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very funny and realistic! a great short story.