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You have a nice, tight style of writing, and yes, the action is great, R.W.
I voted. Good job!

thanks, augustus, every vote counts, and i will send you a message.

Let us know when you've expanded this story. I voted for you.
Augustus.

I guess that settles it, I'll add a little more back story, and increase the time, maybe turn it into a spinoff of my other vampire series..

Thank you, serena, it helps to know my writing can gain fans of other genres.

I don't usually read this type of story but found your writing very good. my vote Serena

One thing i pride myself on are my action sequences. If it had been able to be longer, for the contest, I would have made it so, but i will take it into consideration, everyone wants me to make it longer...

If you are so inclined this could be made into a longer story. Good transition with the characters..p

well, mum, this is the one i wrote specifically for the contest, it's my other story Ailana that was written from a forum post... But thank you, very much for voting and complimenting, it means a lot.