BookRix

Very good book. I enjoyed it.

Isn't the eyes on the cover the eyes of toothless off how to train your dragon ? (:

I'll keep in mind in the future. I tend to forget that reader's today have more information and knowledge of terms.

Of course in my book about Vietnam that is necessary. Maybe Sam will get that bowl of beer in a future book, LOL!

Thanks again.

I don't know why, but I was very surprised when Sam went down in a hail of gunfire. What was I expecting? But when I read of Sam's encounter with Virgil, I knew I was onto something very good:)

I would like to have seen Sam GET that bowl of beer:)

Great, light story, and your knowledge of the city and the police force showed through, Gunny. Only one small thing I noticed that correction thereof would improve the story I think: The parentheticals for such things like "...B&E (breaking and entering), "...black and white (police car). You might want to dispose of them. They distract the reader, drawing him out of the narrative flow, pointing to the author. They call it authorial intrusion. Most readers would know by the context of the narrative what these things are without being informed what Perps are:)

A small thing, though, in a delightful story. Glad I was able to have read it!

This one is still in editing. I had put it aside for a while. I will look at it again soon.

I just read half of this in one go, and it was a really interesting and entertaining read. I really enjoyed your take on the story - and your take on heaven rejecting Sam and sending him back as a ..... It's very original, which is great too see! My only advice is that when you have time you need to go back and read through it. There are a couple of minor spelling errors, and I find that you tend to use commas in places that don't need it. Other than that though, really well done, and I'l definitely going to continue reading this now :D
Sal

Thank you very much I appreciate it.

Roger

Review - First, awesome cover! And it is well written. You definitely have done your research. Enjoyed the 'cat' concept. It was a different take on coming back down here for unfinished business. Keep my interest throughout. Loved that you left it open for a 'sequel.' Let me know if you add another chapter in the Chronicles of Sam and John. Wonderful job. Robynn

Thank you for the encouragement.

Roger.

I appreciate the kinds words.

Roger.