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This is such a moving story. It often seems to be the case that people in our lives plant little seeds and it's not until much later that they bloom. As barrycarver said, punch up the punctuation, fix some spelling, and it's a winner! If this is a true story, I would check out the Memories group and submit this book for reading. Wonderful job!

Nicely put together, R.K.

It is certainly an emotion grabbing piece. There are always things that could use a touch up here and there (grammar, spellings, stuff like that)... but what is actually on the page is worthy of a heart and vote - so here's mine.

That is the highest praise a writer can get thank you so much. I look forward to your messages.

You made me cry - that is good - it should, you elicited the emotions you were aiming for and that is the sign of a good story teller.

I'll p.m. you with other thoughts.