Well I finally got to read this, and it brings back so many awful memories. It's tough being a teenager, and when people make fun of you or treat you bad it just makes it worse. I can recall my first day of high school, I couldn't open my locker and people were standing around laughing. I was just about to give up, when a senior taught me the trick to getting the blasted metal thing open. He tried to console me by saying, it... mehr anzeigen
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I will give this a shot, after I have caught up on my other readings.
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Got'cha Got'cha!
Glad you'll give it a go!
fyi within is spelled wrong on you description lol that just caught my eye not to be picky lol :D
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Yeah What lucia said but i am just going to say THIS BOOK IS AMAZING!!!!!!!! it is so good you could feel the pain that he was going to hiding in the bathroom keeping his head down the thought of suicide it i amazing congratulation please please Edit it :D
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Okie dokie,
I'll be editing
once the book is finished.
As of now I'll be adding chapter 3.
This was pretty good.
The only advice I could give you is to try to break your paragraphs into 2 or 3 parts. Some of them are a bit chunky and can become a bit tiresome to read. And after a dialog, try to start the new sentence as a new paragraph. This way, the whole text will be more airy and the readers will have a better experience.
Keep up the good work!
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Oh I see what you are saying.
I never thought it hard to read,
so I assumed it wouldn't be hard for others,
but thanks for telling me that.
Something new for me to read.
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Glad you found it interesting enough
to read! I'll keep updating, so I hope you'll
continue reading until I've finished. Thanks for
adding to you favs. by the way. Really boosting my
self-esteem here ^^!
This is actually really good... Like really really really really really good.
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Don't worry ^^!
I'll update it this weekend most
likely. Life was hectic last week so
I didn't get a chance to update it.
(Should be on chapter 4 by now,
but sadly that is the way of life.)
Okayz!! At least your going to update! ^.^ And yes life is mean... So very mean. ._.
IKR IT IS AMAZING :D KEEP IT UP AND PLEASE PLEASE KEEP EDITING
I didn't want to do this, but I will!
Let me know how ya feel bout it, to save my
sanity please? This whale can go crazy. OAO
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I LOVE IT CONTINUE PLEASE :D
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