BookRix

Wish the story would have made it in! :-)

Confusing in the beginning, as it was meant to be, but it all fell into place at the end.

Wow,

Thank you, I appreciate that. Yeah I a wish I'd paid more attention to that part in the rules. Oh well. I do love to build suspense in a story though, thank you.

Its to bad that you didn't make it in time. You are very good. Like how you build the story, the suspense. Like your use of words to create specific pictures. Good job.

Thank you my friends,

Especially as I didn't expect such a rapid response! I'm honored. This must be what a bestselling author feels like! Wait, wait,...deep breath, whew, ahhh, humility returns. lol.

Seriously though, thank you so much.

Russ

Another good read! Thanx, Russ.

Nice ending twist for a spooky tale. Of course the great writing is still there like always :)

Enjoyed the read. Thanks :)

An eerie outlook of what could be. I enjoyed the story very much. Compared to others you have written, definately third in line. But well done, just like the others.