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have you ever seen something in the corner of yoyur eye that isntnt there? ever looked in a mirror and seen someone completey different staring back at you through the glass? i have.

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doazz9
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That was amazing you know! I had a little difficulity reading the text, because of wrong spelling, and that might be because im not American or from England, but I really loved the consept!

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I really like the concept- VERY unique!

You'll probably want to fix your grammar errors- most of the sentences don't have a space after the period at the end, and there's a lot of "I's" that need capitalizing. ("hey.how are you?I'm fine." vs. "Hey? How are you? I'm fine.")

Other than that it's great though!

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