college lust

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college lust
in school love comes to differt terms but when lily finally wants to play she does.

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erotic, sex, teens, love and alcohol
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crewzmega

THIS STORY HAD A LOT OF POTENTIAL, BUT YOUR SPELLING, PUNCTUATION & NO SEPARATION OF PARAGRAPHS, IT MADE IT VERY HARD TO READ. I THINK YOU SHOULD GET SOME HELP ON THIS STORY AND RESUBMIT IT.

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jaidensmom

THIS STORY MAY HAVE HAD some potential but the grammar is poor,and spelling is a mess! Who doesn't use spell check? And then you refer to college, well if they're allowing this in any college no wonder the US is at the bottom for education

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jaidensmom

THIS STORY MAY HAVE HAD some potential but the grammar is poor,and spelling is a mess! Who doesn't use spell check? And then you refer to college, well if they're allowing this in any college no wonder the US is at the bottom for education

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good2helper82

made no sense. it was really great but you need some punctuation i kind of got mixed up. u should write more

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