BookRix

I had to take a second read at this one because I just did not get the very ending. I find your creativity to be quite distinct as I find all of your stories I have read so far have quite a different and odd quality about them. But I like that; the stories, as this story, stands out and is ever so interesting.

Ooh. Spooky. To think I was just about to give up on all these "Beat the Clock" Entries.

OH WOW!
Ain't it always so, you have got to watch those little one's all the time.

Man, read this last night and I couldn't sleep, didn't see that coming!

Great Job! Wonderful story!

Hi, this story had a feeling of a screenplay to it. Your writing is excellent and I felt like I had watched a short horror movie in the end.

Not what I expected. A very sad story.

Woah. Dang. Another slam-dunk, Preston. That ending one of those shoulda-seen-it-coming-but-didn't-want-to things. You, sir, are impressive!

if your going for a Chill you got it. The only thing i suggest is deepen your discriptions on the characterts the dads good though.

Preston!

What can I say? Makes me think how sad, and yet makes me wonder? This one will stay with me for a while.

Wow! That was intense... but I liked it.

Wow, bad kids, bad parents is right! I'm ashamed to admit (sort of), that I enjoyed that ending. Bad seeds! Good job Preston.