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Just kidding. This was great and I can't wait to read the rest of the book! Thanks for the adivce, and maybe I will write a book about not giving up. Thanks!

some juvenile delinquents for a bit lol. I love that they shove trash cans into pools and pop off hood ornaments reminds me of my rebellious days, your descriptions are spot on like all your stories I love them and its wonderful that two of the boys for sure saw the errors in their ways. there always has be to one that will never stop it seems.

Sounds a tad like a slice of my life; when you do things without thinkingand later wonder WHY? Good story.

Your story is timeless and reminds me of a James Dean story, and yet it could still take place today. Smooth and enjoyable read. Serena

First, I am so glad that my dear friend, Judy Colella, has had a chance to read your work. She is one of our brightest and best authors. Yes, Judy is quite correct. You wrote this beautifully, easily staying in present tense, and giving us a glimpse into the mindset of troubled, or bored, young men. You seem to know exactly how they think and behave - a real gift indeed. Again, I am thrilled you have joined our "family" and look forward to more of your work.

That was one of the best-written vignettes on the coming-of-age period in a young person's life I've read in ages. Your characters are typical yet surprising, you add interesting texture with their backgrounds and the main character's commentary, and have managed where so many fail, to write in the first person without slipping out of case. I could picture everything you described, also very impressive! I look forward to checking out your other story. Thank you for joining BookRix!