BookRix

Sometimes everything is going wrong;-) I enjoyed this entertaining story and the fine sense of humour.

This made me laugh a lot! I could easily "see" the whole scene- too bad I don't know the UVic campus better; if I did I'd be able to imagine it all even more vividly!

You have a flare for humor! Entertaining, light, great word descriptions. You have a way of putting words together that elicit a most delightful giggle. Great job! Robynn

ROTFL!!!! Fun read. Good descriptive talent with well placed humor.

I think you cheated with your writing though- with such good subject matter, how could you possibly mess it up?

Well done.

I enjoyed your story very much and even laughed a couple of times. Was I being insensitive? I hope not.You showed how a simple visit to the restroom could be dangerous. Good job.

When everything can go wrong...it will:) I laughed my arse off, watching you teach that bathroom stall a lesson, P:) The only thing that could have made it even funnier (though it would have been a stretch of the, erm...truth) is had he stepped on a rake on his way to the gymnasium or hospital!

Great writing and so funny.

An adorable incident told with all the humor and self deprecation expected of you. I enjoy the way you put your stories together (in pdf format) as they are pleasing to the eye. Again - no errors - perfect grammar - and a hilarious re-telling of what was certainly an embarrassing and painful experience.

Good job Mr. R.