It was late at night when a sound woke me up. I looked around my room but couldn't see anything. I layed my head back down when I felt something rubbing against my leg and I jumped up surprised. Sudenly a deep voice called out from the darkest part of my room. "You are really jumpy, love". My head swivelled toward the mysterious intruder and my gaze landed on a pair of golden eyes that were shinning from the darkness that surounded the strangers form. "W-Who...are you?" I stuttered suddenly fear taking over my body. The man stepped out of the shaddows and I was met with a stunning masculine face with high cheekbones a straight nose and those gorgeous golden eyes, making me forget for a moment my fear towards the stranger. "I am sin, Victoria and even tho I'm not suppose to be talking to mortals, I just could't resist". He said with a smirk.
Alright, it's hot BUT it's full of errors like spelling, improper use of words, some words left out. Much of it is just you are in too much of a hurry to bother with the errors but that';s why we eidit our work to fix those errors before setting it out for others to see. Keep working on it, it is a good idea. Lots of luck.
