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Like everything you write, this was captivating, edgy, and well-contrived - and deserving of a vote!

Good story. I was almost sure you would end the story with "Jeb awoke."
I voted for you.
Augustus.

Difficult to think of anything other than Thank You!

Wow! Of all the many accomplished writers here, you rank at the top, Pastiche!
Your short has such great plot twists, your narrative is gorgeous...and the ending sentence was FABULOUS!!! I proudly voted!

I always close my eyes when I see the baddie about to be hung....but I couldn't close my eyes reading this story. Well written....vividly descriptive....with no waking up from a dream for this poor fellow.

... and it doesn't matter which graveyard!
Thanks for commenting,
Peter

Thanks for posting your short stor. Poor chap found out what it was all about in the end. All stores stop in the graveyard. kind of tough there.