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Some powerful poetry about the difficulty of a young man dealing with life' ups and downs. Having been through trauma and loss myself, I can only offer that there is always "light at the end of the tunnel."

Hello P3te version V,
I have intercepted your transmission, and found it to be very well coded. My favorites were "Desperation" and "War and Pestillence". The last stanza of "Desperation" made me wonder if that is what Major Tom was thinking as he was floating in his tin can far above the world...
Good job, and good luck!
robottina

i enjoyed reading.

Laz

You are trying too hard to rhyme.

My favorites were 'Patti' and 'Depression'. Very compelling and emotional. God Bless and good luck.

and resonate, Pete! I felt Depression as I'd never experienced it before! Each spill was a creative juice overflowing!

Petra :))

Thank you for participating in our
poetry writing contest "Winter & Poems".

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