Vinka ihk renthisjir de simethoti di darastrixi!
That's Draconic for "Thank you for speaking from the point of view of dragons" (transliteration - literally, it's "thanks for speaking from thoughts of dragons").
I know, I know - I'm a major geek... Anyway, very well-written - and here's my geeky vote. ;D
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You definitely have my vote for such a great story, but you have an idea with a lot of potential. I think that you should definitely continue, because such potential should not go wasted :)
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XDDD thanks fer ur review, and yea, i think i WILL actually continue it~! ^^
You have my vote, but I hope you consider extending this story after the contest. EG It takes only one villager to ignore the truce either through 'bravery', foolery or fear to cause distress and mayhem. Schirn's loyalty to his fellow villagers & Drakhev could be tested.-Just a suggestion.
Look forward to reading more of your work.
Chris
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OMG thank you...... :D and i think i might actually continue it, now that i think about it ^^ thanks so much for your review and i will be looking forward to your comments(?)~!
Cute little story, Pearl.
I voted for you.
Augustus.
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XD omg thanks so much~!
This is such a sweet tale. I think the moral lesson of this story is not only applicable to dragons, but humans have to be sensitive to all animals both wild and tamed. Enjoy your week!
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Hi Pearl. I really enjoyed your sweet story. I am sure not many people have thought about how dragons feel, and you described it perfectly. Well done.
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XDDD lol thats all good, thanks for the vote ^^ and you shouldnt be ashamed of knowing things ^^ thats really cool... where did that language come from?