The Twain Shall Meet

North and South collide Von:
The Twain Shall Meet
three generations: The Wilderness, The Wild Time, Wilder than fiction

Written in Flash Fiction covering over one hundred years from the civil year to present

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Drabbles
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barrycarver

A lot of punch in these vignettes.

Yes, certainly worth a long-winded explanation - and tell it all! There is so much to be had emotionally and learned inter-generationally that you just can't leave it here.

What an epic this would make!

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johnstonelim

I like your presentation in that much was said in those few pages, like the wit behind the work but I got to say the last para had me hitting my brakes trying to fugure out the story behind it, took me a while.

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ankitaverma19

Voted! its wonderful how you've told this story in just 300 words. So many emotions! Great work.

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lazarus67

If you just fill in the blanks in between the 3 parts, you have a great story...
Laz

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robinsbooks

Very nice work. Thanks for your help with mine, I think I got it submitted now. I'm new here, don't know my way around.

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mjreed09

How the three stories are interwoven. It's an effective technique and allows for cool little moments where you tie things together, like the "news" voice that gave factual evidence on Reb.

I'm not sure what happened in the second one, it was going smoothly until the very end when that "No!" popped up. You could maybe pare the dialogue down a tiny bit and give us a little more insight into Reb's reasoning.

I think the third... mehr anzeigen

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paulashene

all the comments left when reading. Votes are nice too, but leaving a sentence or two is encouraging and I am touched by all your enthusiasm!...Paula

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