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Great story telling, Paula.

Can’t believe I haven’t caught this before. A real live ghost story, told with candour and atmosphere. This is an intriguing story that makes the reader wish for more. There was just enough character development to push the story along nicely. Even the dog’s fear gives a subtle hint as to where the story was going.

There was no need to flesh out the ghosts, but I would have liked the writer’s flair for writing to do so in this little bit of flash.

Overall, a great little story and as some have said before, very different from Paula’s Shene’s usual style, although there was a dog in there.

I would like to see a longer version of this from the viewpoint of the ghosts.

Carol x

Really goes well, with the weirdness and the old troopers scaring the people. Very well written.

This actually was based on a true story - the couple - the ghosts well, can't rightly say....hahaha...p

This was a really good read. =) Thank goodness nothing happened to the dog. I was pretty scared of that. lol

Marieta, Steve, Joe, ashokaatreya, four.oclock, and Bek..thank you all for stopping by, reading, and commenting. I must learn how to retain my font from word in the posting on bookrix. I had 2 distinct fonts for the different parts of the story but they mysteriously posted as the same.

I walked away from that experience with only a black eye from the cot. The ghosts {2 I choose at random and named} are doomed to play this scene out over and over and over. I think I have less of a nightmare walking away.

We've been back to that park in the daytime and the bathrooms are spooky even during the day.

a very nice story with a wonderful flow...I can see in your book very dynamic characters with complex feelings and actions..and those words ''all work for nothing'' are great..the book have a wonderful message ,Paula ,dear ,...lovely to read

I liked this book by Paula Shene very much. Good job, Paula.

Steve Nedelton

Good one paula.joeparente
alittle different from what you have written but i like it!!

Wonderful! your coining of words is always true to the theme..nothing beyond the need...A night in the wood is worth experiecing from different angles created by introducing two couples in a very typical situation in the wood when mid-night falls and there is the need for shelter in the wood..I would vote in the favour.