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An exciting story with good tension and buildup. Loved the description - I could feel the cold air and urged them on to the Petersons. Good story :)
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You paint a vivid picture of the snow-covered hills that this story is set in. Good job.
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The tension builds expertly and the descriptions put me right in the story as if I were a bystander watching the chase. Congratulations on the win, well deserved.
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I'm not sure what else to say but Wow!!! Oh and I'm hitting this with a vote. Great job.
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Came back to give a deserving vote!
Good luck!
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Why haven't I read this before? There are so many well written entries here....and this is one of them. A real contender.
Voted.
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I almost forgot. I have to come up with a better system for keeping track of my reading and voting.
Repeating--nicely done
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Patrick S.,
I love the book cover. You have written an edge of your seat sad thriller with a very unexpected surprise within. I wish you the best in the contest. Voted.
Excellent writing!
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