Wow! Amazing. My mind started creating the images while reading this. You have a very unique way of putting words. I loved it.❤
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This poem is haunting and one can feel the anguish inside the protagonist. This person carries a burden no one should ever have to bear. But sadly, most of do at one time or another. Death brings heartbreak and acute loss. Thank Heavens, we have the gift of life, to experience joy, happiness, and beauty.
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Beautifully written! Now to interpret it...
---RbG
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I keep looking for that "Like" button:)
Musings on the death of one's most beloved.
He/she wrote the letter (what words were inside???). Words that would heal. Words that would ask forgiveness. Perhaps simple words, not oft spoken--I Love You. Not having sent it; having kept... mehr anzeigen
Wow. So many great lines in this poem and so many intriguing images. I'm glad that I was bored and decided to give this a read.
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Just came across this work, Patrick, and once again I am blown away by your talent, your insight, your artistry. This is one of your more meaningful, touching and poetic works that is so superior to much of what I read that I shall savor it...save it..and read it over and over again. Thank you for being YOU.
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You words flow so beautifully. I loved it.
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Very sensitive poetry. Best greetings to your muse:-)
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Review - What I love about poetry is the freedom to linked words together to create such visuals that you can't do in book writing.
Love - bonds of steely rope
to mournings of stifling dust
Excellent job, as always! Robynn
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enhanced by the lay out of your words.
You're one I fellow when I see the crumbs thrown down... tempting me to taste again words that sometimes cuts the heart.
Excellent... p;]
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Patrick,
Very touching. You have a very unique way of putting words and a story together. I really like it. You can write about anything!
Exceptional!
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:) Thanks, Melissa...
Did you perchance see this youtube vid?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rh6pyu6xhIg
Wow! She does an amazing job reciting your touching poem. I also watched a video of her performing "God Bless The Outcast" and "I'll Know". She's very talented and so are you, my friend.