It was just flawless. I loved the flow and I am wondering what's the story behind writing this beautiful masterpiece.:)
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Wow this is short but so beautiful. I loved it ❤
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This short story is what you call a masterpiece. Every description word in this book is as beautiful as a movie where you can easily imagine the scenery. It is truly incredible.
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I can't believe it's been already 5 years since I read this lovely story/poem. It's still beautiful.
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It read like a symphony with crescendos and valleys that made the words dance. However it was terribly sad. I hope he finds some sort of happiness by the end of the book.
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Patrick,
The book cover is beautiful. A very beautiful and touching short story adaptation from the Book of Angelina. The descriptions you write come to life within the story. Your writing is flawless.
Exceptional!
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superlike...it seems like a poem i was reading...great is ur work...short and sweet...
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Excellent. How can I add to what has been said? Your writing IS poetry in motion...the description of being with God sucked me right in. Great story, I want more.
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Written like poetry . . . I actually got lost in the pages and caught up in the dream. Beautiful . . . Just beautiful . . . Thirsty to read more!
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Not long enough, I was just getting into it and it was over, look forward to more of your work....
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Thank you so much, E.
I wrote it seven years ago. It's a chapter from a book I never completed (sadly). I think "Cathedral" had definite promise. Maybe one day I'll go back and complete it.
I was heavy into the phenomenal composer Karl Jenkins when I sat down and wrote the... mehr anzeigen
Thank you so much, E.
I wrote it seven years ago. It's a chapter from a book I never completed (sadly). I think "Cathedral" had definite promise. Maybe one day I'll go back and complete it.
I was heavy into the phenomenal composer Karl Jenkins when I sat down and wrote the chapter, listening over and over and over to a particular cut from his album as I wrote.
Please, if you haven't already, bring up the youtube video and listen to the music as you read again. The portion of the chapter beginning, "I float on the wings..."...I was inspired so much by In Paradisum, envisioning one of the two main characters (Matthew) breaking his writer's block. I saw the images so clearly...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D5o8C-ZfITU
Oh wow I really loved this story and I wanna read more of it so do inform me when you'll make a complete book of it.
I checked the link. This is sooooo good. Thanks for introducing me to it. I really enjoyed it. Well I did a little research about this music and I got this
"In... mehr anzeigen
Oh wow I really loved this story and I wanna read more of it so do inform me when you'll make a complete book of it.
I checked the link. This is sooooo good. Thanks for introducing me to it. I really enjoyed it. Well I did a little research about this music and I got this
"In paradisum deducant te angeli, in tuo adventu suscipiant te martyres, et perducant te in civitatem sanctam Jerusalem.
Chorus angelorum te suscipiant, et cum Lazaro quondam paupere æternam habeas requiem."
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"May angels lead you into paradise, and may martyrs receive you at your arrival, and may they lead you into the holy city Jerusalem.
May a chorus of angels receive you, and with Lazarus who was once a pauper may you have eternal rest"
I was like wow *_*
The lyrics are quite beautiful. Jenkins nailed the music.
I THINK Gabriel Faure wrote the lyrics, way back in the early part of the 20th century, although it's possible the lovely lyrics are ancient--a part of the Catholic Mass for the Dead.
Anyway, I've always loved Faure's... mehr anzeigen
The lyrics are quite beautiful. Jenkins nailed the music.
I THINK Gabriel Faure wrote the lyrics, way back in the early part of the 20th century, although it's possible the lovely lyrics are ancient--a part of the Catholic Mass for the Dead.
Anyway, I've always loved Faure's version. It's much lighter than Jenkins'...but both are what I would consider Masterpieces.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6-i1ESIRKdA