I like "Love Vows" the best. It makes me think of a song that I can't recall the name of. Maybe it's "If I Were A Building" or some other tune. All of your poems in this book are exceptional. Interesting observations made in the poetry. Wonderful usage of adjectives and/or adverbs, as always.
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love vows is pretty dark - but it works, i thought it was really great! :)
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I really enjoyed "Children"
Although they all painted interesting images in my head!
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Thank you Patrick for the six journeys you take your readers on. Your imagery and descriptive words I felt I was experiencing it all first hand! Look forward to reading all your works!
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I enjoyed reading your poetry but my favorite has to be treeing. I have always been fascinated by trees. I love the descriptive journey that you took us on! Look forward to reading more of your works! :)
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Your poetry is beautiful and touching. Vows and Poem are my favorites.
I always look forward to reading your writings. :)
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Oh Patrick, you are so masterful with your use of imagery. Just beautiful ...
CJ
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I found this poem funny and sweet at the same time, I love it!! Okay on to reading the others...
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Your poems are simple, yet profound in meaning and imagry, humerous and entertaining. I loved them all, really cool my friend.Great Job!
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I thought your poems were pretty good.
I am no expert, but I like them.
Oilcan
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Laughing. Pretty bad, lol. I was about 20 when I wrote those. My e.e. Cummings phase! Ahh (yeck) the 1970's!
I was 19 when I composed these:) Thanks again, Melissa.