Six Poems

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Six Poems
At nineteen, I was in college, sitting on the window sill of one of the classrooms one afternoon, gazing out at the city, a book of E. E. Cummings' poetry in hand. I was, at the time, enamored by words and fragmented images, more so than conventional prose.

And so, I wrote these...

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mysterywriter723

I like "Love Vows" the best. It makes me think of a song that I can't recall the name of. Maybe it's "If I Were A Building" or some other tune. All of your poems in this book are exceptional. Interesting observations made in the poetry. Wonderful usage of adjectives and/or adverbs, as always.

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felixthecat

I was 19 when I composed these:) Thanks again, Melissa.

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bookzilla

love vows is pretty dark - but it works, i thought it was really great! :)

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RebeckDawn

I really enjoyed "Children"
Although they all painted interesting images in my head!

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guidedgal

Thank you Patrick for the six journeys you take your readers on. Your imagery and descriptive words I felt I was experiencing it all first hand! Look forward to reading all your works!

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guidedgal

I enjoyed reading your poetry but my favorite has to be treeing. I have always been fascinated by trees. I love the descriptive journey that you took us on! Look forward to reading more of your works! :)

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UniquePoet60

Your poetry is beautiful and touching. Vows and Poem are my favorites.

I always look forward to reading your writings. :)

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Gelöschter User

Oh Patrick, you are so masterful with your use of imagery. Just beautiful ...
CJ

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evangheline

I found this poem funny and sweet at the same time, I love it!! Okay on to reading the others...

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positiveinfinity

Your poems are simple, yet profound in meaning and imagry, humerous and entertaining. I loved them all, really cool my friend.Great Job!

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oilcan

I thought your poems were pretty good.
I am no expert, but I like them.

Oilcan

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felixthecat

Laughing. Pretty bad, lol. I was about 20 when I wrote those. My e.e. Cummings phase! Ahh (yeck) the 1970's!

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