Absolutely stunning. It's just breath taking. I don't have words to praise your writing. You're amazing.
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I'm awe struck... by Sarah and by the mind that created her. She's a sweet impossible dream. Thank you for sharing.
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well after reading this epic story, i think i will crawl back under my rock now!
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This is gorgeous, very well written!
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Thanks, P:) Maybe the only thing I wish I'd done was either delete Freddie Mercury's song (I love Queen:), or else tie it into the ending, written by Grayson Hugh. Consistency.
"Picasso...I've heard of him..." my god, Pat you really did a great job with this one. The biblical references along to notes on art and the sensual details and imagery were blended really well. This was beautiful.
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I don't think you were here when I wrote/published this one, Ang. Glad you liked it!!!
I might have just been shy and not commenting much back then...and I'm glad I saw this :D
Absolutely beautiful, Patrick. And so, so, sad. One of the better pieces of writing I've had the pleasure of reading in a long time. Shame on me for overlooking it for this long. Again, beautifully done.
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COMING FROM YOU, JOHN...:) X 1,000!
This was beautiful. How often do we prevent ourselves from seeing? Simply because we've convinced ourselves that it's impossible?
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What I wrote two years ago about this? Ditto. On steroids. ')
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Great story. Confidently written. Loved it.
Like Michael, many of us, at times, lack the courage to take a step into the unknown? Maybe reading this story will inspire you to: JUST DO IT!
Well done, Patrick. Looking forward to reading many more of your books.
BTW, lovely cover too.
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Thanks my man! Seriously though, NO writer here or anywhere else needs to feel cowed by mine or anyone else's work. Especially by mine, lol. I must believe your comment was tongue-in-cheek!
no it was sincere, amazing read, i think i will go back to the drawing board, i am light years behind everyone else :) if it was star wars i would be in the first movie, and everyone else in star wars 7 :)
Ha ha ha. But the first was the BEST:)
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of course star wars one was the best :)