I have to agree with L. Avery Brown. Vampire stories aren't always my chosen genre. However, you have produced a mesmerizing work of art with so few words. I especially liked the viewpoint of the Vicar. Your vivid depictions drew me in to this short tale, that intertwines two souls and their God. This could very easily become a longer tale. I must commend you on your word choices and your ability to paint a scene in one's mind.
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You really have a way with words. well done.
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I'm not a huge 'vamp-fan'...in fact, I suppose I'm not one at all. No, wait scratch that, NOW I'm a fan!
But then again, you knew that!
Got my vote!
Avery!
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Don't generally comment on my (lovely) comments, but this, ol' buddy: DON'T look into her eyes, and DON'T walk off the church steps into the cemetery :)
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