Mea Culpa (Through My Fault)

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Mea Culpa (Through My Fault)
Vampires? Yes.
Three one hundred word stories told from three different points of view. I need 71 more characters, but I really don't want to give away the plots at this time, so...THE END of Blurb:)

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mysterywriter723

I have to agree with L. Avery Brown. Vampire stories aren't always my chosen genre. However, you have produced a mesmerizing work of art with so few words. I especially liked the viewpoint of the Vicar. Your vivid depictions drew me in to this short tale, that intertwines two souls and their God. This could very easily become a longer tale. I must commend you on your word choices and your ability to paint a scene in one's mind.

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Gelöschter User

You really have a way with words. well done.

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L. Avery Brown

I'm not a huge 'vamp-fan'...in fact, I suppose I'm not one at all. No, wait scratch that, NOW I'm a fan!

But then again, you knew that!

Got my vote!

Avery!

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felixthecat

Don't generally comment on my (lovely) comments, but this, ol' buddy: DON'T look into her eyes, and DON'T walk off the church steps into the cemetery :)

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