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You captured my attention from the start. I felt his pain as it were my own, You are what every writer hopes and dreams to achieve . To leave us wanting more...

that's a really beautiful writing.. bu please continue..

This is beautiful.

Really?

What?

Now having said that, you wrote a very beautiful romantic story. The feelings of the main character are so strong, that it's as though he was near me, telling me this story personally. I loved it, although I was waiting imaptitntly for the ending and ta-da! Surprise!

I'll have to write a sequel to this, although I might have done so unconsciously :P.

Well done.

I love the romace in it :)

Patrick,

What a beautifully written romantic love story. I could only imagine her letting him know how she feels....

Excellent writing! :)

Knowing you and me being who I am, I know the the story ended on a positive note.

Greetings Friend,
It appears that many moons ago you entered this story in a contest. Which one was it? It's a darling little tale. I have a similar scene in one of my stories (not on Bookrix) but yours is better (I think). Very well done.
Michael.

What does she say? Oh, I really liked it! :D It's too bad there is a girl named Graciela that I don't get along with, that distracted me. This was still really good though :D